site to review

Here, go and review my very first website... on second thought, you probably shouldn't... it's pretty bad!

http://www.angelfire.com/ok/phaser2000

You gotta love those big black and yellow under construction logos, and the free Angelfire background so dark you can't read the text on it (not even sure why I never realized that and didn't change it)...

But hey... that was how long ago now? At least two years!

Here are my suggestions:

1: The top frame seems useless and what is that entry field doing there?

2: Opt for a different background or go for a plain backround colour. Also make sure that all the text is visible

3: On the main page give us a hint as to what your site will be about when (if) it is up.

Thats all for now hope is t was helpful

Thanks for reviewing... guess you didn't catch the sarcasm in my first post? I was saying that it was my first website that I made, and I have made more since then, and have absolutely no desire to improve that old one. It was just my learning site. I was just pointing out my newbie mistakes that all (or at least most) of us should make. Then, in time, we realize what they are for ourselves and (hopefully) learn from them.

... for our sake, i hope you figured out that a site needs content too!:D

Yeah, I know that now... I've done others since then that are better, hehe. Right now I am working on a new website... lots of content, but lots of work, hope I can finish it, but then again, websites are never really done, right?