Have a look and be nice to a noobie.

[GANJATAZ]

I would like some constructive criticism on my site, I am new to the site building game so please be gentle with me.

It is nowhere near complete yet, but I would like a general assesment of what some of you more experienced builders think.

Many thanks,

GANJATAZ

click here to visit my site please (http://clix.to/ganjataz)

[Jan]

Not bad for a first site :)

I think you have too many animations for starters. It is very distracting.

Also remove the borders around your pic links by using border=0 or use text instead of .gifs.

(did you get permission from MSN to use their angry smiley that is distorted because you enlarged it?)

[anhedonia]

Okay well I can't view your site because Bravenet's backing up their files and stuff; should be back up in an hour. Anyway, I think you should reconsider what redirect to use.

Here's a list, which you can compare to Bravenet's services and then choose :D:

http://www.has.it
http://www.now.nu
http://www.dot.nu
http://www.xrs.net
http://www.ipfox.com
http://www.datapimp.com

:)

[Blank Verse]

all those animations gave me a seizure.

[anhedonia]

Aww, that site's cute! :)

Just tone down the animated .gif's a little :).

[cheatpark]

For a first site not bad but you shouldn't use msn for a host. It looks as if your site doesn't use anything complicated like scripts so finding a host for your site shouldn't be too hard. I would recommend that you use anything apart from msn. There is a whole selection of hosts you can use.

http://www.tripod.com
http://www.tripod.co.uk
http://www.fortunecity.com
http://www.liquid2k.com

Try all of them and see which one is best. I am thinking you used some sort of site editor on msn. I can help you move your site to another host if you get any problems. The hosts I listed above are not the best but are reasonable if you just want a basic site. Tell me what you think.

<edit>I noticed your site only has one page. Make a navigation system too by using tables and setting the border to 0. Putting things into categories makes it easier to find. </edit>