luahanrasa.com need someone to review :)

[maelzx]

Greetings,

although luahanrasa.com (my site) didnt 100% finish ... but already near to complete ... so just browse on http://www.luahanrasa.com and give a comment ... on my guestbook there or just post here (i read both anyway).

this is my first attemp to design my site by my own ... and also all the script use there is scripted by me (alone) ... and i really - really happy i can finish it although it takes me a month before can come out with that such design (i'm not a *designer* so i need to force my brain to think a creative idea).

and .. do you got any idea ? please give me some of your idea ...

ps : *i'm programmer* in my web design/programming team ...

[maelzx]

ah .. forgot to mention .. use only Internet Explorer 5.0 and above :) dont mention me there is an error with netscape ... i didnt test with netscape because i know there will be an error with netscape (but i dont know about netscape 6 - maybe it support well).

[Mika]

Nice, good work. If it's your first attempt you did a great jop. The only thing I could say is the background color..I don't like it that much.:)

[maelzx]

Mika do you have suggestion for what color that i should use ? I just use color schemer for that color :P i'm quite blank on how to make the color scheme for my site looks wonderfull (so most of the time i just use gray color).

[Kaliber]

Nice, bur change the bg to a blue or orange or something :D

Apart from that great!

[Belgiumdude]

very nice,I like your guestbook:)

[R. K. Raja]

Cool,that's something unique. I like it ;)

I also think the bg should be a shade of blue or something, but the one currently there isn't too bad either :cool:

[maelzx]

ahaha .. looks like i have to change the background color ... its just fill in process only .. i'll do that later .. currently finishing up my news script ... ahh .. just too lazy to finish it.

thanks coz somebody like my guestbook ... i just use simple mysql add and mysql query only ... lol. anyway maybe after i finish out the admin page for that guesbook i put it for you to download .. that way i can increase hits for my site a little bit :P

[trenzterra]

btw maelzx, remember you once hosted me? I don't need the account anymore... anyway ratings:

Speed: 220/250
Design: 234/250
Images matches design: 210/250
Organised: 243/250

Comments: None

Overall: 907/1000, 91/100, 9/10

[gackt]

i really like the design of your site; i think it's really cute. i, too, have a slight problem with the bg color (teal?). love the guestbook. why didn't you customize the color of the scrollbar on the main and sub pages?

[conkermaniac]

Comments:

- Great entry page. Excellent layout on the pop-up window, though I honestly hate sites that have an entry page leading to a pop-up. :)

- Aaargh...you can't resize that window. I get really annoyed when I see these types of screens. But I guess it's necessary because any resizing could mess up the format.

- Blue/purple links are the default, and I think they're too boring. Spice it up a bit. Try some different colors to match the theme of your site.

- When I click on an image in your nav bar, the outlines show up. Since they aren't traced over the images that well, they really look bad. That has to be fixed.

- Why are three of the pages "Under Construction"? I do take off points for content, even if I know the site is not finished.

- Some grammar problems. Though "Assalamualaikum" isn't the common English interpretation of the Arabic phrase, I guess it is written in a different character set anyway. :) One problem you must fix, though. It's not "wrote by whomever". It's generally "written by whomever".

Content: D+ (69)
Colors/Images/Text: B+ (89)
Layout: B- (82)
Technical: B- (80) support for different browsers a BIG issue

Overall (not an average): 80%

[Space Ghost]

* Enterance page is nice
* Colors look nice
* Tag board background is really nice
* Main page full of text :)
* I like the "optimized for..." font.

Overall: 83%