Review my site

[MN-Carl]

Please review my site -

please note this is only based upon template / layout ... the links don't work :mad:

This took me a few mins :o

Rate it out of 10 ;)

http://kickme.to/cdudeuk18

[MN-Carl]

anyone :confused:

[DCI]

-9

[cheatpark]

I can't review this site because it is incomplete. I also like to see what it looks like when you move from page to page. Complete the site and then I will review it.

[MN-Carl]

Originally posted by DCI
-9

charming :o

I can take this because i know i havn't put all i can give into this site ... infact ....

i have put nothing into it ....

But i still wanna know what you guys think is wrong with it :confused:

[cheatpark]

Originally posted by cdudeuk18


charming :o

I can take this because i know i havn't put all i can give into this site ... infact ....

i have put nothing into it ....

But i still wanna know what you guys think is wrong with it :confused:
ok. For the nav bar use images instead of text. Black doesn't look well on that type of blue. Maybe make the blue a bit lighter or use a different background colour. The logo is well...not very good. I know you didn't use a good program but is a couple of swirly lines meant to impress someone. I suppose the text in the logo is ok. Maybe make it more emphasised or something. There are some tips to help you improve your site template. I hope that is what you wanted.

[Dusty]

I can take this because i know i havn't put all i can give into this siteWell, if you can take it:

-9 is a bit too generous for me...

To start, the logo is simply pathetic. If I were going to do something that craptacular I wouldn't even bother. I don't know what effect you were going after with the semicolons, periods, and pipes but it failed. There's no margin to speak of and the entire page seems to just be stuck in the corner of a field of bland gray-- I say the "page" since there really is no content. The only highlight is the hope your "under major design" notice brings.

[MN-Carl]

Originally posted by Dusty
Well, if you can take it:

-9 is a bit too generous for me...

To start, the logo is simply pathetic. If I were going to do something that craptacular I wouldn't even bother. I don't know what effect you were going after with the semicolons, periods, and pipes but it failed. There's no margin to speak of and the entire page seems to just be stuck in the corner of a field of bland gray-- I say the "page" since there really is no content. The only highlight is the hope your "under major design" notice brings.

Read my first post

Its a first take design .......

Once i get some good graphics software installed i can do some good quality graphics ..


The swirls .. where simple things so there wasn't just test there ... and for me to see what the colours look like against the white and the text ...#

There is no content there because i havn't finished the template yet ... which is why i'm posting here

[Dusty]

Read my first post"Please review my site - / please note this is only based upon template / layout ... the links don't work / This took me a few mins / Rate it out of 10"

:confused:

Am I supposed to read further into that than what's written? I reviewed it and indirectly rated it, do you want more?

[MN-Carl]

Originally posted by Dusty
"Please review my site - / please note this is only based upon template / layout ... the links don't work / This took me a few mins / Rate it out of 10"

:confused:

Am I supposed to read further into that than what's written? I reviewed it and indirectly rated it, do you want more?

Read what is written .. than look at your post. :rolleyes:

ADD >

http://cdudeuk18.home7.dk3.com/index2.html

buttons like that .... or more graphical .. or what :confused:

[Dusty]

Read what is written .. th[e]n look at your post. Why don't you spell out exactly what you want us to do as I'm reading "review and rate my template" and that's apparently not what you're looking for.

[MN-Carl]

Originally posted by Dusty
Why don't you spell out exactly what you want us to do as I'm reading "review and rate my template" and that's apparently not what you're looking for.

Well ... i said more specifically layout..

and remember this is a "personal site"

i make no money out of this ..... what so ever

its not like i'm getting a couple of £££'s for it ... or more .... its for myself :cool:

[nitroboy]

wait untill conkermaniac see this, and you'll probably start all over :p :bandit2: :biggrin2: :D :cool2:

[trenzterra]

Organised: 200/250
Speed: 230/250
Design: 180/250
Images matches layout: 180/250

Comments: Text colour makes the site look awkward

Overall: 790/1000, 79/100/, 8/10 - Try improving!

[meow]

I wonder about this reating system some of you use. What would a real kick a*s*s site get? Like 150/10? I've never seen anyone get below 7/10. :confused2

[trenzterra]

Originally posted by meow
I wonder about this reating system some of you use. What would a real kick a*s*s site get? Like 150/10? I've never seen anyone get below 7/10. :confused2 a real kick --- site will get 996(or 995 depending on what the person wants me to rate)/1000. Nothing is perfect :)

[meow]

Uhu, what I meant is it seems like nothing is less than perfect. :confused2

[conkermaniac]

I give more Fs than As. In order of the letter grades I give out:

1. C
2. B
3. D
4. F
5. A

[meow]

Nice - if I knew what those letters meant. :confused2

[Space Ghost]

* Font could look good in a smaller size
* ";' Welcome ';" why have you got that ;' '; crap?
* The graphic on the size just looks plain ugly.
* Grey with blue -- no chance.

Overall: 3.2/10.

[meow]

I viewed source. Tell me, what is the fantastic amount of table tags supposed to do? Surely not make a 1*2 table?

I'm also wondering if you have copied the links from somewhere (God knows why). The pipes would make sence if they were lined up horizontally but they don't know.

[Jan]

Didn't you have a thread in General discussions about this? It hasn't changed since has it :confused: Oh except for the under construction sign :confused2

[anhedonia]

Originally posted by Jan
Oh except for the under construction sign :confused2

Whoa...Big change. :rolleyes:

[meow]

Yes, yes! Totally revamped. This will be a kicka*s portal for all those those great hosts he is starting too. I'll die if I don't get an account! Pleeeease can I have one? I'll beta test and only need like 10kB, just text, no html. :p

[Jan]

Maybe you can start a hosting thread or two meow, good way to soar past hayama-kun ;)

[meow]

I don't want to soar. Maybe I'll start a host. It'll be along the lines "TinyServer off a floppy with email upload". No restrictions on content or file types. It's your space and we understand your needs. Interested? ;)

[Confuzzled]

Actually, my whole site is on a floppy right now...though its not that big with graphics and all on the disk it still only takes up .25 MB....hehe

As for the site - you broke my #1 rule: don't post your site until you have CONTENT!!! Bring this site up again next week after you've put more than ten minutes into it. My site is only a few pages but I've put probably about 30 hours into it over the past two weeks(how long its been up). Although most of that time was spent in my favorite pixel-editing program editing my gifs!

[Pimpin Monkey]

Let me start off by saying I have extreme respect for you cdudeuk18! You have helped me in various subjects. I really expected something better from you for your site!! I can understand if you not to good a designing graphics, thats understandable, but the colors blow me away! I know you have more creativeness in you!