Please Help!!! Review.. give me the good bad and ugly=)

[newbizhelp]

Our site is almost done.. though not quite...(for example our headings are not right...etc.,links not put together,etc.)
Let me know what you think.. so we can put any suggestions to good use.. Thank guys!

I WANT YOUR COMMENTS!

www.freebizconsulting.8m.com/new/index.htm

[Blank Verse]

ugh...Flash is nice when integrated into the layout...but Flash intros are just damned annoying. The layout is a little general. You should amybe make some nicer looking graphics or something. It's missing something to make it appealing.

[Jan]

We would like to invite you to find out for yourself and experience personally our commitment and attention to detail that are the cornerstones of our business.
The first think I noticed was the typos in your flash banner at http://www.freebizconsulting.8m.com/new/Home.htm

That was a turnoff for starters :( Something to fix maybe? ;)

[roly]

nice

how ever chnage the font of the content (Welcome to Advertising & Marketing Solutions blah blah blah) to verdana

<<I edited your post to include both posts Roly :), see the edit button there? That is for when you want to add something>>

[Blank Verse]

ok, two things...

why verdana?

and did you need two posts to say that?

[trenzterra]

Comments:
-Once the flash is playing, the Skip intro dissapears which I don't like if I want to skip the intro once I see some of the flash.
-Center a layout because there is lots of white space on the right on higher resolutions
-Change the font size on the graphics' text on the left(the links) because it looks awkward
-Not much graphics

Design: 800/1000
Organised: 860/1000
Graphics: 500/1000

Overall: 720/1000, 72%

[[lhomme]]

Sorry to be harsh but I have to comment:

The flash is an EXTREME turnoff. I hated the music, found the flash animation to be boring and amaturish, the text to just continue endlessly, found no sense of uniformity in font and size, and the lack of a skip intro link the final straw. I waited a bit for it to end and just decided to close the window. You have to change the flash.

Btw - I am on a cable connection so the wait time was almost nothing. It would be worse if the surfer was on a 56k.

[Christopher]

The flash intro took about 1 1/2 minutes for me on my 56K modem...

The flash movie wasn't that bad too me, but I wouldn't put it there at the entrace of the site... Mabe in the "about" sections or something, like [lhomme] siad, it is too long, for an intro. The music was okay, but I think you could do better. And make the "Skip Intro" link bigger, make it like a button, right now you have to click on the text of the link, very hard...

The site looked okay, I would get some of the graphics on the left changed, or change the background of them to a different color, or make them rounded or something. It looks like a cutoff, one second its the background, then the next its a grafic, make them fit in.

And it might just me be me (probably), but please change the font to Arial or Verdana, or something like that, I find it easier on they eyes.


But very nice site. Just a couple things to work on and your in the bussiness!


Good luck! :classic2: