2 reviews

[gazal]

k, the first one is mine. Let me know what your guys think

http://www.gazaldesigns.com


and the second one is for a friend of mine. He wanted to have a tecky feel to his splah page..
http://www.gazaldesigns.com/athlonxp.htm

Thanks :)

[YUPAPA]

You need to insert RIGHTMARGIN="0" in your body tag! :classic2:
AND could you leave a little orange space between the word "GAZAL DSEiGNS" and the gray color at the bottom? I don't want the word touch the gray color!! Maybe that looks better, but IF you don't like it, that's your choice. It is your design :)

[Giancarlo]

Originally posted by gazal
k, the first one is mine. Let me know what your guys think

http://www.gazaldesigns.com

Orange and gray is not a good combo... and it appears you only have forums on the site. Not much content. Also, I notice that the gray background color below the orange is slightly different than the gray used on the text. If you don't know what I am talking about I will give you a screenshot.



and the second one is for a friend of mine. He wanted to have a tecky feel to his splah page..
http://www.gazaldesigns.com/athlonxp.htm

Thanks :)

Nice Splash page.

[gazal]

Thanks for the comments.. But i think orange and grey is a nice combo. Everyone has there own opionion :)

The main site is due to open soon. I have to much work on my hands at the moment... I can't wait to finish Graphic Arts @ R.M.I.T Univeristy. So i can work on my site more.hehe

Can you give me a screen shot of what you mean?

Thanks :)

Gazal

[Mekhu]

gazal... he is right man... those colors are very hard on the eyes... not like a red on blue burn but just makes you strain to read....

I would honestly thing about changing... even if you darkened the grey a little..

[gazal]

In art school it called "reserve effect" but i might change it.. it might be different screen RES

[Mekhu]

That's cool and all, but how many of us went to art school...

[Jan]

I have a small portion of the screenshot here. This was taken at 800*600 :eek:

[meow]

If you are referring to the small text it isn't supposed to be readable (I think).

[gazal]

The small blurry text is not suppose to be readable, it's just a text effect. If you guys are talking about the one that says

"gate 2 will open soon, bla,bla,bla" I might have to make that more reable.."

Jan: is that what you see? or is that just beacuse you save it as a jpg file..

Cause if its not then i need to re-save the image and make it abit better quality.. hope that make sense..


Thanks :)

[Jan]

Then why is it there? :rolleyes: To make people think they are going blind? :eek:

Not a good look at all, sorry gazal :(

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Jan: is that what you see? or is that just beacuse you save it as a gif file..

That is what I see, and it is a .jpg

[gazal]

Everyone has their own opioion.. :)

Is there beacuse it look good. to me anyway.. It's a design text effect look I learnt

[meow]

lol! It's very common now. I can't say I'm that fond of it either (sorry!) but to me (with my greater intelligence) it's as least obvious it's decorative. :p

[gazal]

Originally posted by meow
(with my greater intelligence)

U intelligent? nooo :P j/k

ah well someone told me once that i should use text as text not decorations. I guess i didn't listen to them.hehe

[meow]

Originally posted by gazal

U intelligent? nooo :P j/k

Compared to Jan? :classic2:

There's something wrong with it Gaz. Too fuzzy. The sections with _readable_ text kinda float into eachother. Maybe more contrast and more distinct borders ( more space) between the text sections..

Are you going to use a big image or are you going to rework it in HTML with the image as template?

[Jan]

Originally posted by gazal
Everyone has their own opioion.. :)

Is there beacuse it look good. to me anyway.. It's a design text effect look I learnt
Save your fat paws meow, he likes it....why the review? :confused2

[meow]

Oh, it's possible to influence him. One just has to be smart. :cool:
BTW I have a feeling you wouldn't mind my fat paws eihter. :biggrin2:

[gazal]

Originally posted by meow
Oh, it's possible to influence him. One just has to be smart. :cool:


I'm just an easy handsome guy.. ;)

Reviews were suppose to give ideas and other people opinions. You still end up doing what you like, and what you think looks good.

Meow what do u mean "Are you going to use a big image or are you going to rework it in HTML with the image as template?"

[Jan]

Originally posted by gazal

Reviews were suppose to give ideas and other people opinions. You still end up doing what you like, and what you think looks good.

I guess I won't bother with your reviews again, I rarely review sites anyway, but yours will be out in future.

Enjoy your fuzzy site! :p

[Giancarlo]

Gazal, if you won't accept advice or won't even consider then why even ask for a review?

You won't get my hit on site I can't even read because it is blurry.

[meow]

Originally posted by Jan

I guess I won't bother with your reviews again, I rarely review sites anyway, but yours will be out in future.

Enjoy your fuzzy site! :p
You do too! All the time. "I can't open that page in my almost new Netscape (http://www.blooberry.com/indexdot/history/browsers.htm)", "Look how your site looks in Netscape (http://www.alistapart.com/stories/tohell/)", Don't you support Netscape (http://www.mozilla.org)?"
:p

[meow]

Originally posted by gazal

Meow what do u mean "Are you going to use a big image or are you going to rework it in HTML with the image as template?"
I mean is the grahics the page or is it a draft for the layout of the page.

[Homeygwiz]

Gazal I have to agree with everyone elses opinion that your sight having most of the text blurry isn't good.

That's the 1# complant most people have about websites is the ability to read them.

But, thats just my opinion.

HGW

[Mekhu]

Gazal, just humor me and change that grey to a darker shade... should help.