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JemR
September 2nd, 2002, 06:21
Excuse the poor typing!

"pzzzt.. KTZ 95.3 FM, wishing you a good morning from the heart of brooklyn"
"ugh" said nick who was lying in bed.
"ring ring... ring ring.. ring ring. Nick here, can't get to the phone, leave a message, beeep."
"Nick, its Kortenzky, Our agent Hayley Nightshade has been captured while researching a chem lab in Iran, We need you too look for her.. Ring back NOW."
Nick searches around the bed for the phone and finds it under hte pillow. He calls back..
"ring ring"
"hello, kortenzky here"
"it's me"
"oh nice of you to finally awaken, be here at 10:00"
"ok.. bye" the line has gone dead
Nick stumbled out of bed and looked at the clock, he only 1 hour to get ready.
Nick clambers to the bathroom, Nick is about 6'5 with a rugged complexion.
"god.. I need a shave" ....
Later at the US. CIU (Crime Investiagation Unit)
"Nicholas, We are going to drop you at the chemical lab, 25miles south of Iran's capital city [Author Note: What is it?!] where Agent Nightshade was captured. You will be armed with your standard Walther PPK with a silencer, If you can bring Nigthshade bakc in one piece."
It had started the rain outside, Nick was escorted to the CIU airfield. The plane he was travelling in was an unmarked small airplane.

Thats waht I got so far. Any comments/ideas/criticisms. That isn't the end by the way :biggrin2:
[added]

"hello agent stone"
"hello there."
"Were going to fly through france, as to avoid any contact with British/French forces"
"please put your seatbelt on "...
the plane starts up , 3 hours later.
"bang bang"
what hell was that said the pilot
"looks like weve got some company"
"fly over .. points west"
"your'e the boss"
"ok your heer. ill take out the guards at the front enterance. You enter via that vent pointing upwards
"ok ..."
The vent was grotty looking, Nick saw some blood and looked down.
"Our weapons test is online sir..."
"ok , fire to these coordinates.."
The general hands the scientist a piece of paper..
#20,343,023
"but sir, thats the coordinates for stockholm"
"That is the plan.."
Points a gun at the scientist
Yes sir...
"oh yes.. tell Ajeeb to keep that girl in the cell, ration her food until she talks. i'm giving you a deadline of 24 hours, if she doesn't speak then, kill her."
Nick crawls on..
"You'll never get it out of more, death doesn't scare" said the voice.
"Oh, I'm sure you will.."
"How does this sound: "CIU Agent Hayley Nightshade kills thousands of innocent people in biological terror over American shores"
"I'll never go down for it, CIU knows I've been captured, besides who are people going to belive, You, Rickov Elcamber, Respoisble for killing thousands of people by testing biological weapons on them, or me, Hayley Nightshade, one of americas best agents?"
"Ooh, I don't think you'll get out of here alive."
"Could General Rickov please come to the main testing lab."
"I'll be back, "darling".."

[c] JemR. 2002.