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internetsparadise
May 21st, 2001, 19:02
Could someone tell me what they think of the top of my page so far. Tell me if you think it is a good design so far. Thanx alot!
http://ip1.wigloo.com/test.htm
Gonzo
May 23rd, 2001, 19:31
Its nice but the text could look better, it looks kinda messy, the text.
WorldWarGeneral
May 23rd, 2001, 20:36
Looks good. Very professional. But like Gonzo said, the text looks a bit messy. But maybe that's just because it's a Gif image and not the actual webpage...But it looks good so far. :)
hime-chan
May 25th, 2001, 06:12
Well, I'd say the basics are good, and of course the text isn't anti-aliased, but that may very well be the GIF-image.
Try a lighter shade of grey for the main menu, it looks brown and a little muddy like this.
Also, the "Professional Web Design" needs some work. Either leave the shadow off the 'Professional' or put one on the 'Web Design', too. This way, it looks off a bit perspectively-wise.
Try to find some alignment, too. You don't have any lines apart from the right side of the screen, and that makes for an 'unclean' impression.
Use more care when Antialiasing the top left logo, too. It looks cut-off around the edges right now.
~ Hime-chan, who should perhaps keep her mouth shut until she gets her own page running
kojiro
May 25th, 2001, 07:22
:) I don't like your logo looks kinda bland. Change it. The color scheme also needs some changes.
internetsparadise
May 30th, 2001, 21:29
I have added the content to my design. Tell me what you think. www.brettmeyers.com
The suggestions made but others on the design above havent been changed but will be soon!
Gayowulf
May 31st, 2001, 00:33
Here's what i think
Unorganized, and off centre. The blue top bit should go all the way to the edge of the page.
You need a background of some sort.
put your professional web design logo somewhere else, or take it away until your own design loks professional.
Try to limit the scroll to the bottom of the page.
Your "hosting" page is the same as the bottom of the main page. maybe make them separate or look different.
Design page is good, but the "free click here" animation is tacky.
On html help page, eliminate all the useless white space at the bottom. Same to the "about" page.
for convienience use a form for contact purposes instead of a bunch of email adresses.
Your page is on the way to looking pro; With a little bit of work it will be excellent. :)
Bobo
May 31st, 2001, 20:30
some pics are blurry
that ad on the main page should be place somewhere else
maby u should have some kind of border to make it look more organized
on your main psge th stuff bellow the banner should be links
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