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ian
June 17th, 2001, 15:38
hi, please review and give ideas on www.conchsalad.com Thank you

pro5ject
June 17th, 2001, 17:25
It could do with alot of work, no offense but it looks like it was built in yahoo pagerbuilder or something similar.

Ideas for you

1.get rid of the bg tiles
2.Centre your logo, login & search boxes
3.tidy up the text, its all over the shop
4.add some elements to make the visitor stay there and sign up (I would almost certainly not)

Sorry but the truth can hurt

Maybe get some ideas from major email address sign up pages.

ian
June 17th, 2001, 17:29
i built it in dreamweaver.

does everyone else agree with him?

pro5ject
June 17th, 2001, 17:32
I'm not saying it was made in yahoo pagebuilder or something I'm just saying that it looks that way, (sorry :))

ian
June 17th, 2001, 17:34
so what would you do with the background?

pro5ject
June 17th, 2001, 17:39
I would the bg white or a very light shade of blue, If you need any help I'm happy to.
I could maybe re design it for you and you could tell me what you think, it will be a few day though (got alot of work on)
I would do this for you for free.

ian
June 17th, 2001, 17:41
absolutley, please do, I would much appreciate it!

pro5ject
June 17th, 2001, 17:50
I'll post a link up here when its done, it will be a couple of days

ian
June 17th, 2001, 17:57
thanks, do you think i should add something like a message board or a free links page? Should i put the greeting cards on that same domain? Do you have any idea's for me?

pro5ject
June 17th, 2001, 18:22
Click here (http://www.another.com) , I think thats the sort of thing you should be heading for.