My first Flash Banner

[veggie1232]

Lol so i downloaded flash 8 trial a couple days ago and this is my first banner :D

http://photobucket.com/albums/a305/veggie1232/?action=view&current=finishedNDSbanner.swf

i might add more effects but ya :D


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here is it with some more effect wait a sec because diffrent effects come at diffrent times :)

http://photobucket.com/albums/a305/veggie1232/?action=view&current=newerone.swf

personally im not liking this banner to much but i hope i win the contest anyways its on another forum

what do u think do you guys think its pretty good be truthfull lol no joke if you like it tell me if you dont tell me :) and tell me what u dont or do like about it :)

[stuffradio]

hehe, cool

[Nug]

Cool every cool

[Brandon]

Good 1st logo...
Suggestion: Maybe make the text silver? Very hard to see...

[veggie1232]

it looks pretty bright on my screen birghten up ur screen a bit :) but silver might not be to bad of an idea

[veggie1232]

I edited my first post and put another link to the banner but it has more effects this time lol

[Craig]

Looks cool, nice work veggie :-), I maybe coming to you for a new banner soon.

[Nug]

I think i'm going to learn a bit more flash.,.

[veggie1232]

sounds good :)

[ksb]

very nice! Good job!

((i wish i could use flash lol))

[X3r0X]

Hello,

While the actual flash animation is quite good, but the actual banner is of quite poor quality. Try to diversify your colours into a better (and brighter) scheme. Thats just for starters, then add a background (perhaps a C4D render) such as an abstract work, intergrate the animations with that and then blend the renders to fit in with the bg. I would then proceed to change the text into something more exciting. Overall at the moment I would rate it a 4/5 out of 10, but hey im a graphic designer, thus a tough critic.

Hopefully that helps,
Chris

[Craig]

veggie can you try the logo in white? I think it would look more better & stand out.

[veggie1232]

very nice! Good job!

((i wish i could use flash lol))

you can man its not as hard as everyone says *depending if you have worked with other design programs like me * what really helped me was

www.learnflash.com (http://www.learnflash.com) alot of great free tutorials *samples* and there in video easey to follow just do all of the free ones about 7 or so and the rest coast money but taught me alot also i found some randome tutorials from google :)

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thanks for the advice guys the compition was supose to end at 5pm my time today but he extended it another 24 hours :( lol

the abstract thing im not to sure about the banner looks a little clutterd to me but i will take that in for future banner projects im going to try the white text now as that text took SOOOOO LONG to make lol