2 reviews

[gazal]

k, the first one is mine. Let me know what your guys think

http://www.gazaldesigns.com


and the second one is for a friend of mine. He wanted to have a tecky feel to his splah page..
http://www.gazaldesigns.com/athlonxp.htm

Thanks

[YUPAPA]

You need to insert RIGHTMARGIN="0" in your body tag!
AND could you leave a little orange space between the word "GAZAL DSEiGNS" and the gray color at the bottom? I don't want the word touch the gray color!! Maybe that looks better, but IF you don't like it, that's your choice. It is your design

[Giancarlo]

Originally posted by gazal
k, the first one is mine. Let me know what your guys think

http://www.gazaldesigns.com

Orange and gray is not a good combo... and it appears you only have forums on the site. Not much content. Also, I notice that the gray background color below the orange is slightly different than the gray used on the text. If you don't know what I am talking about I will give you a screenshot.

and the second one is for a friend of mine. He wanted to have a tecky feel to his splah page..
http://www.gazaldesigns.com/athlonxp.htm

Thanks

Nice Splash page.

[gazal]

Thanks for the comments.. But i think orange and grey is a nice combo. Everyone has there own opionion

The main site is due to open soon. I have to much work on my hands at the moment... I can't wait to finish Graphic Arts @ R.M.I.T Univeristy. So i can work on my site more.hehe

Can you give me a screen shot of what you mean?

Thanks

Gazal

[Mekhu]

gazal... he is right man... those colors are very hard on the eyes... not like a red on blue burn but just makes you strain to read....

I would honestly thing about changing... even if you darkened the grey a little..

[gazal]

In art school it called "reserve effect" but i might change it.. it might be different screen RES

[Mekhu]

That's cool and all, but how many of us went to art school...

[Jan]

I have a small portion of the screenshot here. This was taken at 800*600

[meow]

If you are referring to the small text it isn't supposed to be readable (I think).

[gazal]

The small blurry text is not suppose to be readable, it's just a text effect. If you guys are talking about the one that says

"gate 2 will open soon, bla,bla,bla" I might have to make that more reable.."

Jan: is that what you see? or is that just beacuse you save it as a jpg file..

Cause if its not then i need to re-save the image and make it abit better quality.. hope that make sense..


Thanks

[Jan]

Then why is it there? To make people think they are going blind?

Not a good look at all, sorry gazal

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Jan: is that what you see? or is that just beacuse you save it as a gif file..

That is what I see, and it is a .jpg

[gazal]

Everyone has their own opioion..

Is there beacuse it look good. to me anyway.. It's a design text effect look I learnt

[meow]

lol! It's very common now. I can't say I'm that fond of it either (sorry!) but to me (with my greater intelligence) it's as least obvious it's decorative.

[gazal]

Originally posted by meow
(with my greater intelligence)

U intelligent? nooo j/k

ah well someone told me once that i should use text as text not decorations. I guess i didn't listen to them.hehe

[meow]

Originally posted by gazal

U intelligent? nooo j/k

Compared to Jan?

There's something wrong with it Gaz. Too fuzzy. The sections with _readable_ text kinda float into eachother. Maybe more contrast and more distinct borders ( more space) between the text sections..

Are you going to use a big image or are you going to rework it in HTML with the image as template?