I need a fast review on my revise of my design

[File_wizard]

Hello guys i got my designer to Do some revising he said to post to see what the review is like here it is

Before:
http://www.etradehosting.com/1/001.gif

After:
http://i27.tinypic.com/181zyh.jpg

Thanks
Richard!

 

[YourData1st]

It's fine. I'm just not a big fan of fake computer/server pictures, but that's just me. The computers look better in the second version though.

 

[File_wizard]

Thanks im getting a 2nd revision done tonight and it be a server picture instead a computer

 

[hamster]

Erm.... it's spelled "Premium".....

 

[File_wizard]

Heh it be fixed tomorrow he made it wrong he said he will fix it


English is not his first language

 

[FastaServers]

Whats with the paint line through it? :eek3:

& I dont really know what the before picture looks like (file not found)
But the after is really nice.

 

[creativeVPS-Dan]

Not a bad design, something should be done to liven up the list there at the bottom left though

 

[DarkBlood]

Before:
http://www.etradehosting.com/1/001.gif

404'd!