How To Best Communicate Our Idea

[azoundria]

Please tell me honestly - if you were signing up for our service, and came across this page:

http://ismywebsite.com/start

Would you bother to read it? How can I make the ideas better-communicated?

 

[WL-Michael]

I kinda skimmed over it a bit, it's too close. I've learned to consolidate things myself. Both that and highlighting/bolding things seems to be the way to go as the eye scans lightly when there is more content to be viewed and only the most relative/liking things stand out when skimming.

Hope this helps.

 

[azoundria]

Well thanks for that. I guess skimming is fairly common-place.

Perhaps a better question for me to ask is - how can I communicate this information more effectively?