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/Peo, FreeWebSpace.net
I agree with themoose. There is bad grammar all through out the site. O and themoose you and I both are visitor 455. I guess the thing isn't working properly. There is bad grammar other than just the welcome message.
Your background image is way too large (563.73 KB) and takes too long to load. At least set your background color to black so that we don't have to look at a bright white background while waiting for the background image to load.
The default font face and text link colors don't fit.
It should be "You're the ** visitor" or "You are the ** visitor" not "You the ** visitor".
It should be something like "Please tell your friends about my website! It would be a BIG favor!" not "Please right about my website to your friends! It wound bee a BIG favor!"
Considering your younger age it's quite amazing.
If you make change in the font colour as light yellowish green instead of dark green it will look nice and it will increase the readability.
You could make auto scroll for text appears in the news frame.
Not a bad site for someone of your age. If you do continue building web pages, I'd suggest you move away from frames. I just clicked on one of your links the "cursor change page"... and it completely reopened the same page in that small little box window.